Re: Hayes Production Squad

Hi Garrison,
My name is Binda Singh, I'm the Director of the Swansea Film Festival
2006 and lecture in screening writing at Swansea University.(you are
free to check out my credentials in google)

You have asked for some constructive comments...here we go:

1. The essential element of ANY great story is a sound structure. You
have that quality in plenty. Midnight Snack, Mid Day Snack and the Ref,
all have great stories at their centre - well done.

2. You have been blessed with a patient and talented cast - encourage
them further in your role as director. I notice that you have begun to
share out these roles as the movie making has progressed.

3. Considering the technical limitations (lighting, sound) you have
achieved a good standard of production.

4. As an action point I might suggest that you develop any story
boarding to a higher degree before shooting and consider increasing the
use of cutaways and POV shots.

Well done to all at Hayes Productions and I hope to see more of your
work.

When is the next release due ?

Best Regards
Binda Singh